| Index: native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/python.html
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| diff --git a/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/python.html b/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/python.html
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| @@ -49,11 +49,12 @@ require you to agree to allow the page unlimited storage
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| (Click “Ok” in the bar at the top of your browser window.)</p>
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| <p>The first run requires a large download. Please be patient.
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| Also, as PNaCl translates executables to native code on demand,
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| -each program will also have have a noticable load delay on first run.
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| +each program will also have a noticable load delay on first run.
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| We’re actively working to improve this.</p>
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| <p>NOTE: This environment will leave a substantial (800MB) payload in your
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| browser. See the cleanup section below to learn how to recover this space.</p>
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| -<p>Once the download is complete you should see a bash prompt:</p>
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| +<p>Once the download is complete, you should see a bash prompt (ignore
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| +the gcc warning, our web C compiler is coming soon!):</p>
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| <pre class="prettyprint">
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| WARNING: gcc not yet available for your platform (coming soon).
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| bash.nmf-4.3$
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| @@ -69,7 +70,7 @@ we recommend you use the
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| <a class="reference external" href="/native-client/sdk/download">Native Client SDK</a>.</p>
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| <b><font color="#880000">
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| NOTE: The NaCl Development Environment is not yet stable.
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| -Ideally user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates
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| +Ideally, user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates
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| or sporadically. We're working to resolve this.
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| </font></b><h3 id="navigating-in-the-dev-environment">Navigating in the Dev Environment</h3>
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| <p>The NaCl Dev Environment behaves like a mini-UNIX system.
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| @@ -91,7 +92,7 @@ that corresponds to the /mnt/html5/home directory.</li>
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| <p>Many of the steps in this tutorial will be easier to copy and paste
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| into the Dev Environment.
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| To copy and paste in the Dev Environment web page,
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| -you can use the keyboard or the menu options under (☰ → Edit).</p>
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| +you can use the keyboard or the menu options (top right corner ☰ → Edit).</p>
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| <p>On your platform use:</p>
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| <blockquote>
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| <div><ul class="small-gap">
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| @@ -141,7 +142,7 @@ $ vim <filename>
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| <p>This tutorial also uses a revision control program called
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| <a class="reference external" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Git_(software)">git</a>.
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| In order to commit to a git repository,
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| -you need to setup your environment to with your identity.</p>
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| +you need to set up your identity.</p>
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| <p>Run these commands (with your info) to setup your <cite>~/.gitconfig</cite>
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| for use:</p>
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| <pre class="prettyprint">
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| @@ -201,14 +202,13 @@ You’ll probably want to consult the <a href="https://docs.python.org/2/lib
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| I would suggest you check out the HtmlDiff class and make use of
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| the make_file member function. Note our goal is to create a
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| full HTML diff, so the make_table function is insufficient.
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| -I would also suggest the splitlines
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| -function may come in handy.</p>
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| +The splitlines function may also come in handy.</p>
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| <p>You can test diff.py manually as you would in a normal UNIX environment.
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| It can be run like this:</p>
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| <pre class="prettyprint">
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| ./diff.py before.txt after.txt out.html
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| </pre>
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| -<p>Once everything is working diff.html will contain an html diff.
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| +<p>Once everything is working, diff.html will contain an html diff.
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| After the initial <cite>make</cite> you can hit “Run” to test your changes.</p>
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| <p>Now get to it, and good luck!</p>
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| <h2 id="what-you-ve-learned">What you’ve learned</h2>
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| @@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ interpreted languages that have been ported to PNaCl.</p>
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| to become a complete development solution,
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| for the broadest range of development options, check out the
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| <a class="reference external" href="https://developer.chrome.com/native-client/sdk/download">NaCl SDK</a>.</p>
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| -<p>For questions, concerns, and help contact us at
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| +<p>For questions, concerns, or help contact us at
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| <a class="reference external" href="https://groups.google.com/forum/#!forum/native-client-discuss">native-client-discuss@googlegroups.com</a>.</p>
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| <p>Bring your interpreted app to PNaCl today!</p>
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| <h2 id="cleanup">Cleanup</h2>
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