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Issue 737703002: Fixing typos / grammar in cds2014. (Closed) Base URL: https://chromium.googlesource.com/chromium/src.git@master
Patch Set: Created 6 years, 1 month ago
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diff --git a/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/python.html b/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/python.html
index 67a54d0d3b34f5e096f164f2fc83c3fe73506fad..5fd4e066139fa73bc43585ae35a903f85929c4e8 100644
--- a/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/python.html
+++ b/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/python.html
@@ -49,11 +49,12 @@ require you to agree to allow the page unlimited storage
(Click &#8220;Ok&#8221; in the bar at the top of your browser window.)</p>
<p>The first run requires a large download. Please be patient.
Also, as PNaCl translates executables to native code on demand,
-each program will also have have a noticable load delay on first run.
+each program will also have a noticable load delay on first run.
We&#8217;re actively working to improve this.</p>
<p>NOTE: This environment will leave a substantial (800MB) payload in your
browser. See the cleanup section below to learn how to recover this space.</p>
-<p>Once the download is complete you should see a bash prompt:</p>
+<p>Once the download is complete, you should see a bash prompt (ignore
+the gcc warning, our web C compiler is coming soon!):</p>
<pre class="prettyprint">
WARNING: gcc not yet available for your platform (coming soon).
bash.nmf-4.3$
@@ -69,7 +70,7 @@ we recommend you use the
<a class="reference external" href="/native-client/sdk/download">Native Client SDK</a>.</p>
<b><font color="#880000">
NOTE: The NaCl Development Environment is not yet stable.
-Ideally user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates
+Ideally, user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates
or sporadically. We're working to resolve this.
</font></b><h3 id="navigating-in-the-dev-environment">Navigating in the Dev Environment</h3>
<p>The NaCl Dev Environment behaves like a mini-UNIX system.
@@ -91,7 +92,7 @@ that corresponds to the /mnt/html5/home directory.</li>
<p>Many of the steps in this tutorial will be easier to copy and paste
into the Dev Environment.
To copy and paste in the Dev Environment web page,
-you can use the keyboard or the menu options under (&#9776; &#8594; Edit).</p>
+you can use the keyboard or the menu options (top right corner &#9776; &#8594; Edit).</p>
<p>On your platform use:</p>
<blockquote>
<div><ul class="small-gap">
@@ -141,7 +142,7 @@ $ vim &lt;filename&gt;
<p>This tutorial also uses a revision control program called
<a class="reference external" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Git_(software)">git</a>.
In order to commit to a git repository,
-you need to setup your environment to with your identity.</p>
+you need to set up your identity.</p>
<p>Run these commands (with your info) to setup your <cite>~/.gitconfig</cite>
for use:</p>
<pre class="prettyprint">
@@ -201,14 +202,13 @@ You&#8217;ll probably want to consult the <a href="https://docs.python.org/2/lib
I would suggest you check out the HtmlDiff class and make use of
the make_file member function. Note our goal is to create a
full HTML diff, so the make_table function is insufficient.
-I would also suggest the splitlines
-function may come in handy.</p>
+The splitlines function may also come in handy.</p>
<p>You can test diff.py manually as you would in a normal UNIX environment.
It can be run like this:</p>
<pre class="prettyprint">
./diff.py before.txt after.txt out.html
</pre>
-<p>Once everything is working diff.html will contain an html diff.
+<p>Once everything is working, diff.html will contain an html diff.
After the initial <cite>make</cite> you can hit &#8220;Run&#8221; to test your changes.</p>
<p>Now get to it, and good luck!</p>
<h2 id="what-you-ve-learned">What you&#8217;ve learned</h2>
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ interpreted languages that have been ported to PNaCl.</p>
to become a complete development solution,
for the broadest range of development options, check out the
<a class="reference external" href="https://developer.chrome.com/native-client/sdk/download">NaCl SDK</a>.</p>
-<p>For questions, concerns, and help contact us at
+<p>For questions, concerns, or help contact us at
<a class="reference external" href="https://groups.google.com/forum/#!forum/native-client-discuss">native-client-discuss&#64;googlegroups.com</a>.</p>
<p>Bring your interpreted app to PNaCl today!</p>
<h2 id="cleanup">Cleanup</h2>
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