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@@ -49,11 +49,12 @@ require you to agree to allow the page unlimited storage |
(Click “Ok” in the bar at the top of your browser window.)</p> |
<p>The first run requires a large download. Please be patient. |
Also, as PNaCl translates executables to native code on demand, |
-each program will also have have a noticable load delay on first run. |
+each program will also have a noticable load delay on first run. |
We’re actively working to improve this.</p> |
<p>NOTE: This environment will leave a substantial (800MB) payload in your |
browser. See the cleanup section below to learn how to recover this space.</p> |
-<p>Once the download is complete you should see a bash prompt:</p> |
+<p>Once the download is complete, you should see a bash prompt (ignore |
+the gcc warning, our web C compiler is coming soon!):</p> |
<pre class="prettyprint"> |
WARNING: gcc not yet available for your platform (coming soon). |
bash.nmf-4.3$ |
@@ -69,7 +70,7 @@ we recommend you use the |
<a class="reference external" href="/native-client/sdk/download">Native Client SDK</a>.</p> |
<b><font color="#880000"> |
NOTE: The NaCl Development Environment is not yet stable. |
-Ideally user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates |
+Ideally, user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates |
or sporadically. We're working to resolve this. |
</font></b><h3 id="navigating-in-the-dev-environment">Navigating in the Dev Environment</h3> |
<p>The NaCl Dev Environment behaves like a mini-UNIX system. |
@@ -91,7 +92,7 @@ that corresponds to the /mnt/html5/home directory.</li> |
<p>Many of the steps in this tutorial will be easier to copy and paste |
into the Dev Environment. |
To copy and paste in the Dev Environment web page, |
-you can use the keyboard or the menu options under (☰ → Edit).</p> |
+you can use the keyboard or the menu options (top right corner ☰ → Edit).</p> |
<p>On your platform use:</p> |
<blockquote> |
<div><ul class="small-gap"> |
@@ -141,7 +142,7 @@ $ vim <filename> |
<p>This tutorial also uses a revision control program called |
<a class="reference external" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Git_(software)">git</a>. |
In order to commit to a git repository, |
-you need to setup your environment to with your identity.</p> |
+you need to set up your identity.</p> |
<p>Run these commands (with your info) to setup your <cite>~/.gitconfig</cite> |
for use:</p> |
<pre class="prettyprint"> |
@@ -201,14 +202,13 @@ You’ll probably want to consult the <a href="https://docs.python.org/2/lib |
I would suggest you check out the HtmlDiff class and make use of |
the make_file member function. Note our goal is to create a |
full HTML diff, so the make_table function is insufficient. |
-I would also suggest the splitlines |
-function may come in handy.</p> |
+The splitlines function may also come in handy.</p> |
<p>You can test diff.py manually as you would in a normal UNIX environment. |
It can be run like this:</p> |
<pre class="prettyprint"> |
./diff.py before.txt after.txt out.html |
</pre> |
-<p>Once everything is working diff.html will contain an html diff. |
+<p>Once everything is working, diff.html will contain an html diff. |
After the initial <cite>make</cite> you can hit “Run” to test your changes.</p> |
<p>Now get to it, and good luck!</p> |
<h2 id="what-you-ve-learned">What you’ve learned</h2> |
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ interpreted languages that have been ported to PNaCl.</p> |
to become a complete development solution, |
for the broadest range of development options, check out the |
<a class="reference external" href="https://developer.chrome.com/native-client/sdk/download">NaCl SDK</a>.</p> |
-<p>For questions, concerns, and help contact us at |
+<p>For questions, concerns, or help contact us at |
<a class="reference external" href="https://groups.google.com/forum/#!forum/native-client-discuss">native-client-discuss@googlegroups.com</a>.</p> |
<p>Bring your interpreted app to PNaCl today!</p> |
<h2 id="cleanup">Cleanup</h2> |