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Issue 737703002: Fixing typos / grammar in cds2014. (Closed) Base URL: https://chromium.googlesource.com/chromium/src.git@master
Patch Set: Created 6 years, 1 month ago
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diff --git a/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/cpp.html b/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/cpp.html
index c437318f63d4015f75e957cab9656fdd00921dac..8bf6f95d2a2b69483fa9047b2d86bcc57689431c 100644
--- a/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/cpp.html
+++ b/native_client_sdk/doc_generated/cds2014/cpp.html
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ to your browser.</p>
browser. See the cleanup section below to learn how to recover this space.</p>
<p>Once the installation is complete, run the app.</p>
<p>On the first run, it will download several packages.
-Once download is complete you should see a bash prompt:</p>
+Once download is complete, you should see a bash prompt:</p>
<pre class="prettyprint">
bash.nmf-4.3$
</pre>
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ we recommend you use the
<a class="reference external" href="/native-client/sdk/download">Native Client SDK</a>.</p>
<b><font color="#880000">
NOTE: The NaCl Development Environment is not yet stable.
-Ideally user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates
+Ideally, user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates
or sporadically. We're working to resolve this.
</font></b><h3 id="navigating-in-the-dev-environment">Navigating in the Dev Environment</h3>
<p>The NaCl Dev Environment behaves like a mini-UNIX system.
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ $ vim &lt;filename&gt;
<p>This tutorial also uses a revision control program called
<a class="reference external" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Git_(software)">git</a>.
In order to commit to a git repository,
-you need to setup your environment to with your identity.</p>
+you need to set up your identity.</p>
<p>Run these commands (with your info) to setup your <cite>~/.gitconfig</cite>
for use:</p>
<pre class="prettyprint">
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ on the integral role fire played in its campus life.</p>
<h2 id="water">Water</h2>
<p>Remarkably, not everyone enjoys the primal illusion of fire.</p>
<p>Your task in this codelab is to transform the rising fire
-effect you see before you, into a beautiful, tranquil waterfall.
+effect you see before you into a beautiful, tranquil waterfall.
This will require digging into some C++ code.</p>
<p>Before you begin, you&#8217;ll want to copy our fire program to a new name,
since you might decide later that you like fire better, I know I do:</p>
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ our flame effect is actually monochrome. A single intensity
value is used in the flame simulation. This is then converted
to color based on a multi-color gradient.
To alter the color-scheme, locate this palette, and exchange
-the red component (first) with blue (third).</p>
+the red component (first) with the blue one (third).</p>
<p>Hint: Focus your energies on the CreatePalette function.</p>
<p>You can test you changes at any time with:</p>
<pre class="prettyprint">
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ other
to become a complete development solution,
for the broadest range of development options, check out the
<a class="reference external" href="https://developer.chrome.com/native-client/cpp-api">NaCl SDK</a>.</p>
-<p>For questions, concerns, and help contact us at
+<p>For questions, concerns, or help contact us at
<a class="reference external" href="https://groups.google.com/forum/#!forum/native-client-discuss">native-client-discuss&#64;googlegroups.com</a>.</p>
<p>I hope this codelab has lit a fire in you to go out there,
and bring an awesome C/C++ application to NaCl or PNaCl today!</p>
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