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@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ to your browser.</p> |
browser. See the cleanup section below to learn how to recover this space.</p> |
<p>Once the installation is complete, run the app.</p> |
<p>On the first run, it will download several packages. |
-Once download is complete you should see a bash prompt:</p> |
+Once download is complete, you should see a bash prompt:</p> |
<pre class="prettyprint"> |
bash.nmf-4.3$ |
</pre> |
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ we recommend you use the |
<a class="reference external" href="/native-client/sdk/download">Native Client SDK</a>.</p> |
<b><font color="#880000"> |
NOTE: The NaCl Development Environment is not yet stable. |
-Ideally user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates |
+Ideally, user data is preserved, but currently it can be lost during updates |
or sporadically. We're working to resolve this. |
</font></b><h3 id="navigating-in-the-dev-environment">Navigating in the Dev Environment</h3> |
<p>The NaCl Dev Environment behaves like a mini-UNIX system. |
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ $ vim <filename> |
<p>This tutorial also uses a revision control program called |
<a class="reference external" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Git_(software)">git</a>. |
In order to commit to a git repository, |
-you need to setup your environment to with your identity.</p> |
+you need to set up your identity.</p> |
<p>Run these commands (with your info) to setup your <cite>~/.gitconfig</cite> |
for use:</p> |
<pre class="prettyprint"> |
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ on the integral role fire played in its campus life.</p> |
<h2 id="water">Water</h2> |
<p>Remarkably, not everyone enjoys the primal illusion of fire.</p> |
<p>Your task in this codelab is to transform the rising fire |
-effect you see before you, into a beautiful, tranquil waterfall. |
+effect you see before you into a beautiful, tranquil waterfall. |
This will require digging into some C++ code.</p> |
<p>Before you begin, you’ll want to copy our fire program to a new name, |
since you might decide later that you like fire better, I know I do:</p> |
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ our flame effect is actually monochrome. A single intensity |
value is used in the flame simulation. This is then converted |
to color based on a multi-color gradient. |
To alter the color-scheme, locate this palette, and exchange |
-the red component (first) with blue (third).</p> |
+the red component (first) with the blue one (third).</p> |
<p>Hint: Focus your energies on the CreatePalette function.</p> |
<p>You can test you changes at any time with:</p> |
<pre class="prettyprint"> |
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ other |
to become a complete development solution, |
for the broadest range of development options, check out the |
<a class="reference external" href="https://developer.chrome.com/native-client/cpp-api">NaCl SDK</a>.</p> |
-<p>For questions, concerns, and help contact us at |
+<p>For questions, concerns, or help contact us at |
<a class="reference external" href="https://groups.google.com/forum/#!forum/native-client-discuss">native-client-discuss@googlegroups.com</a>.</p> |
<p>I hope this codelab has lit a fire in you to go out there, |
and bring an awesome C/C++ application to NaCl or PNaCl today!</p> |