[Payments] update strings

components/payments_strings.grdp

 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
 <grit-part>
 
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_TITLE" desc="Title of the dialog that presents a request for payment for some good or service [Desktop and iOS only].">
     Your Payment
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_NAME_FIELD_IN_CONTACT_DETAILS" desc="The label for text input field containing the full name of a person. [CHAR-LIMIT=32]" formatter_data="android_java">
     Name
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_SAVE_CARD_TO_DEVICE_CHECKBOX" desc="The label for the checkbox that enables the user to save a credit card to their device, for example, on their phone." formatter_data="android_java">
     Save this card to this device
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ACCEPTED_CARDS_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that displays the credit card types that the merchant accepts." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Cards accepted
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ACCEPTED_CARDS_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that displays the credit card types that the merchant accepts. Below the title, we show a row of icons indicating the accepted cards (Visa icon, Mastercard icon, etc.)." formatter_data="android_java">
+    Accepted cards
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_METHOD_OF_PAYMENT_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select the method of payment." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Payment
+    Payment method
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_CONTACT_DETAILS_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select how they can be contacted." formatter_data="android_java">
     Contact info
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_CONTACT_DETAILS_LABEL" desc="The title of the dialog for user to add new contact information, such as the user's full name, an email address or a phone number." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add contact info
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_EDIT_CONTACT_DETAILS_LABEL" desc="The title of the dialog for user to edit their contact information, such as the user's full name, an email address or a phone number." formatter_data="android_java">
     Edit contact info
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_CARD_LABEL" desc="The title of the dialog for user to add new payment card." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add card
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_BILLING_ADDRESS" desc="The title of the dialog for user to add billing address to payment card." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add billing address
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_NAME_ON_CARD" desc="The title of the dialog for user to add name on card to payment card." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add name on card
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_VALID_CARD_NUMBER" desc="The title of the dialog for user to add valid payment card number." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add valid card number
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_MORE_INFORMATION" desc="The title of the dialog for user to add more information to payment card or shipping address or contact info." formatter_data="android_java">
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_MORE_INFORMATION" desc="The title in the Android app title bar for user to add more information to payment card or shipping address or contact info." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add more information
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_EDIT_CARD" desc="The title of the dialog for user to edit payment card." formatter_data="android_java">
     Edit card
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_CREDIT_CARD_EXPIRATION_DATE_ABBR" desc="Abbreviated label for credit card expiration date. [CHAR-LIMIT=32]" formatter_data="android_java">
-    Exp: <ph name="EXPIRATION_MONTH">%1$s<ex>06</ex></ph>/<ph name="EXPIRATION_YEAR">%2$s<ex>17</ex></ph>
+    Expires <ph name="EXPIRATION_MONTH">%1$s<ex>06</ex></ph>/<ph name="EXPIRATION_YEAR">%2$s<ex>17</ex></ph>
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_PHONE_NUMBER" desc="The title of the dialog for user to add phone number to the shipping address or contact info. This phone number can be used, for example, if there's a problem with shipping a package to its destination." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add phone number
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_RECIPIENT" desc="The title of the dialog for user to add the name in the shipping address. This name identifies the person that will receive the shipped package." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add name
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_VALID_ADDRESS" desc="The title of the dialog for user to add valid shipping address. For example, missing state or city name." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add valid address
   </message>
@@ skipping 12 matching lines @@
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PAY_BUTTON" desc="The label for the button that finishes the payment process." formatter_data="android_java">
     Pay
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_LOADING_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that payment information is being loaded up." formatter_data="android_java">
     Loading
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PROCESSING_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that payment is being processed." formatter_data="android_java">
     Processing
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ERROR_MESSAGE_DIALOG_TITLE" desc="The title of the dialog that informs the user that there is error in verifying and charging the payment.">
-    Payment Not Completed
+    Payment not completed
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ERROR_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that there is error in verifying and charging the payment." formatter_data="android_java">
     There was an error processing your order. Please try again.
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_CONTACT" desc="Text on a button that lets a user add new contact details, like the user's full name, an email address or a phone number." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add contact info
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_CARD" desc="Text on a button that lets a user add new payment card." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add card
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ADD_ADDRESS" desc="Text on a button that lets a user add new address." formatter_data="android_java">
     Add address
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_CHECKING_OPTION" desc="Text explaining that the option the user selected is being checked and verified." formatter_data="android_java">
     Checking
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UPDATED_LABEL" desc="The text that informs the user that the total value of their cart has been updated." formatter_data="android_java">
     Updated
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_CARD_AND_ADDRESS_SETTINGS" desc="Label of the section containing the link to go to the settings page for card and address options." formatter_data="android_java">
     You can manage cards and addresses in <ph name="BEGIN_LINK">BEGIN_LINK</ph>Settings<ph name="END_LINK">END_LINK</ph>.
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_CARD_AND_ADDRESS_SETTINGS_SIGNED_IN" desc="Label of the section containing the origin description and the link to go to the settings page for card and address options. This label is used when the user is signed in." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Card and address options are from your Google Account (<ph name="ACCOUNT_EMAIL">%1$s<ex>johndoe@gmail.com</ex></ph>) and Chrome. You can manage these in <ph name="BEGIN_LINK">BEGIN_LINK</ph>Settings<ph name="END_LINK">END_LINK</ph>.
+    Cards and addresses are from Chrome and your Google Account (<ph name="ACCOUNT_EMAIL">%1$s<ex>johndoe@gmail.com</ex></ph>). You can manage them in <ph name="BEGIN_LINK">BEGIN_LINK</ph>Settings<ph name="END_LINK">END_LINK</ph>.
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_CARD_AND_ADDRESS_SETTINGS_SIGNED_OUT" desc="Label of the section containing the origin description and the link to go to the settings page for card and address options. This label is used when the user is not signed in." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Card and address options are from Chrome. You can manage these in <ph name="BEGIN_LINK">BEGIN_LINK</ph>Settings<ph name="END_LINK">END_LINK</ph>.
+    Cards and addresses are from Chrome. You can manage them in <ph name="BEGIN_LINK">BEGIN_LINK</ph>Settings<ph name="END_LINK">END_LINK</ph>.
   </message>
 
   <!-- Credit Card form -->
   <if expr="is_ios">
     <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_CARD_NUMBER" desc="Title of the field representing the number (PAN) on a credit card.">
       Card Number
     </message>
     <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_NAME_ON_CARD" desc="Title of the field representing the full name of a credit card holder.">
       Name on Card

[srahim, 2017/04/10 22:06:38]

Change the string "Name on Card" to "Cardholder Name" to match the
IDS_PAYMENTS_NAME_ON_CARD_REQUIRED.

[gogerald1, 2017/04/10 22:14:02]

Done.

     </message>
       <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_EXP_MONTH" desc="Title of the field representing the expiration month of a credit card.">
       Expiration Month
     </message>
     <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_EXP_YEAR" desc="Title of the field representing the expiration year of a credit card.">
       Expiration Year
     </message>
     <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_BILLING_ADDRESS" desc="Title of the field representing the billing address of a credit card.">
       Billing Address
     </message>
   </if>
 
   <!-- Validation -->
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_VALIDATION_INVALID_NAME" desc="Message displayed to user when name validation fails.">
-    Invalid name
+    Enter a name
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_VALIDATION_INVALID_CREDIT_CARD_EXPIRATION_YEAR" desc="Message displayed to user when the credit card expiration year is in an invalid format.">
-    Invalid expiration year
+    Enter a valid expiration year
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_VALIDATION_INVALID_CREDIT_CARD_EXPIRATION_MONTH" desc="Message displayed to user when the credit card expiration month is in an invalid format.">
-    Invalid expiration month
+    Enter a valid expiration month
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_VALIDATION_INVALID_CREDIT_CARD_EXPIRED" desc="Message displayed to user when the credit card is expired.">
-    The card is expired
+    This card is expired
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_VALIDATION_UNSUPPORTED_CREDIT_CARD_TYPE" desc="Message displayed to user when the credit card type (e.g visa, mastercard) is not supported for this transaction.">
-    Unsupported card type
+    This type of card isn’t supported
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_REQUIRED_FIELD_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that '*' character indicates an input field that is required. The '*' character should not be changed." formatter_data="android_java">
-    * indicates required field
+     * Field is required
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_FIELD_REQUIRED_VALIDATION_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that an input field is required." formatter_data="android_java">
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_FIELD_REQUIRED_VALIDATION_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that an input field is required. “Required” is an adjective." formatter_data="android_java">
     Required field
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PHONE_INVALID_VALIDATION_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that the phone number they have entered is not valid." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Invalid phone number
+    Enter a valid phone number
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_EMAIL_INVALID_VALIDATION_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that the email address they have entered is not valid." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Invalid email address
+    Enter a valid email address
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_CARD_NUMBER_INVALID_VALIDATION_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that the credit card number they have entered is not valid." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Invalid card number
+    Enter a valid card number
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_CARD_EXPIRATION_INVALID_VALIDATION_MESSAGE" desc="The text that informs the user that the credit card expiration date they have entered is not valid." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Invalid expiration date
+    Enter a valid expiration date
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_BILLING_ADDRESS_REQUIRED" desc="The label to indicate billing address is required for payment card." formatter_data="android_java">
     Billing address required
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_NAME_ON_CARD_REQUIRED" desc="The label to indicate name on card is required for payment card." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Name on card required
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_NAME_ON_CARD_REQUIRED" desc="The label to indicate the cardholder name (the name of the owner or “holder” of the credit card)  must be entered." formatter_data="android_java">
+    Cardholder name required
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_MORE_INFORMATION_REQUIRED" desc="The label to indicate more information is required for payment card or shipping address or contact info." formatter_data="android_java">
     More information required
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PHONE_NUMBER_REQUIRED" desc="The label to indicate phone number is required in the shipping address or contact info. This phone number can be used, for example, if there's a problem with shipping a package to its destination." formatter_data="android_java">
     Phone number required
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_RECIPIENT_REQUIRED" desc="The label to indicate recipient name is required in the shipping address. This name identifies the person that will receive the shipped package." formatter_data="android_java">
     Name required
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_INVALID_ADDRESS" desc="The label to indicate the shipping address is invalid. For example, missing state or city name." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Invalid address
+    Enter a valid address
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_EMAIL_REQUIRED" desc="The label to indicate email is required for the contact details. This email can be used to contact the payer." formatter_data="android_java">
     Email required
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_NAME_REQUIRED" desc="The label to indicate name is required for the contact details. This name could be a person or institute name of the payer." formatter_data="android_java">
     Name required
   </message>
 
   <!-- Payment Request (Sections mode) -->
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENT_REQUEST_ORDER_SUMMARY_SECTION_NAME" desc="The name of the Order Summary section in the Payment Sheet of the Payment Request dialog.">
@@ skipping 12 matching lines @@
     <ph name="ITEM_COUNT">$1<ex>2</ex></ph> more items...
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENT_REQUEST_SHIPPING_SECTION_NAME" desc="The name of the Shipping Address section in the Payment Sheet of the Payment Request dialog.">
     Shipping address
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENT_REQUEST_CONTACT_INFO_SECTION_NAME" desc="The name of the Contact Info section in the Payment Sheet of the Payment Request dialog.">
     Contact info
   </message>
 
   <!-- Shipping address in web payments API -->
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_SHIPPING_SUMMARY_LABEL" desc="The title for the section of shipping information. Shipping is typically used for packages." formatter_data="android_java">
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_SHIPPING_SUMMARY_LABEL" desc="The title for the section of shipping information. Shipping is used for packages and things that are mailed. In American English, “shipping” is differentiated from “delivery”. “Delivery” is used, for example, for food delivery." formatter_data="android_java">
     Shipping
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_SHIPPING_ADDRESS_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select the address where the product should be shipped. Shipping is typically used for packages." formatter_data="android_java">
     Shipping address
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_SHIPPING_OPTION_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select how the product should be shipped. Shipping is typically used for packages." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Shipping option
+    Shipping method
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_SELECT_SHIPPING_ADDRESS_FOR_SHIPPING_METHODS" desc="Text implying that a user needs to pick a shipping address to see the shipping methods. Shipping is typically used for packages." formatter_data="android_java">
     Select a shipping address to check shipping methods and requirements.

[srahim, 2017/04/10 22:06:38]

String edit from doc: "To see shipping methods and requirements, select an
address"
No period if it's a single sentence appearing by itself.

[gogerald1, 2017/04/10 22:14:02]

Done.

   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UNSUPPORTED_SHIPPING_ADDRESS" desc="Text implying that a user needs to pick a different shipping address, because the currently selected address is not supported. Shipping is typically used for packages." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Unsupported shipping address. Select a different address.
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UNSUPPORTED_SHIPPING_ADDRESS" desc="Text implying that a user needs to pick a different shipping address, because the currently selected address is not supported. “Ship” is typically used for packages and items that are sent through the mail. In American English, we differentiate “ship” from “deliver." formatter_data="android_java">
+    Can’t ship to this address. Select a different address.
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UNSUPPORTED_SHIPPING_OPTION" desc="Text implying that a user needs to pick a different shipping option, because the currently selected option is not supported. Shipping is typically used for packages." formatter_data="android_java">
-    That shipping option isn’t available. Try a different option.
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UNSUPPORTED_SHIPPING_OPTION" desc="Text implying that a user needs to pick a different shipping option, because the currently selected option is not supported. “Ship” is typically used for packages and items that are sent through the mail. In American English, we differentiate “ship” from deliver." formatter_data="android_java">
+    This shipping method isn’t available. Try a different method.
   </message>
 
   <!-- Delivery address in web payments API -->
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_DELIVERY_SUMMARY_LABEL" desc="The title for the section of delivery information. Delivery is commonly faster than shipping. For example, it might be used for food delivery." formatter_data="android_java">
     Delivery
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_DELIVERY_ADDRESS_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select the address where the product should be delivered. Delivery is commonly faster than shipping. For example, it might be used for food delivery." formatter_data="android_java">
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_DELIVERY_ADDRESS_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select the address where the product should be delivered. In English, “delivery” is differentiated from “shipping.”  For example, “delivery” might be used for meals or meal items or items that need to be immediately sent to a recipient." formatter_data="android_java">
     Delivery address
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_DELIVERY_OPTION_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select how the product should be delivered. Delivery is commonly faster than shipping. For example, it might be used for food delivery." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Delivery option
+    Delivery method
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_SELECT_DELIVERY_ADDRESS_FOR_DELIVERY_METHODS" desc="Text implying that a user needs to pick a delivery address to see the delivery methods. Delivery is commonly faster than shipping. For example, it might be used for food delivery." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Select a delivery address to check delivery methods and requirements.
+    To see delivery methods and requirements, select an address
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UNSUPPORTED_DELIVERY_ADDRESS" desc="Text implying that a user needs to pick a different delivery address, because the currently selected address is not supported. Delivery is commonly faster than shipping. For example, it might be used for food delivery." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Unsupported delivery address. Select a different address.
+    Can’t deliver to this address. Select a different address.
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UNSUPPORTED_DELIVERY_OPTION" desc="Text implying that a user needs to pick a different delivery option, because the currently selected option is not supported. Delivery is commonly faster than shipping. For example, it might be used for food delivery." formatter_data="android_java">
-    That delivery option isn’t available. Try a different option.
+    This delivery method isn’t available. Try a different method.
   </message>
 
   <!-- Pickup address in web payments API -->
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PICKUP_SUMMARY_LABEL" desc="The title for the section of pickup information. For example, this could be the address for laundry pickup." formatter_data="android_java">
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PICKUP_SUMMARY_LABEL" desc="The title for the section of information needed for a service to pick up items from a customer. For example, this could be the address for laundry pickup. “Pickup” is a noun." formatter_data="android_java">
     Pickup
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PICKUP_ADDRESS_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select the address where their item should be picked up. For example, this item could be laundry to be cleaned." formatter_data="android_java">
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PICKUP_ADDRESS_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select the address where a service item should be picked up. For example, the pickup address is where a laundry service picks up a customer’s items to be laundered. “Pickup” functions as an adjective." formatter_data="android_java">
     Pickup address
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PICKUP_OPTION_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select how their item should be picked up. This item can be laundry to be cleaned, for example." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Pickup option
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_PICKUP_OPTION_LABEL" desc="The title for the section that lets the user select how their service item should be picked up. This item can be laundry to be cleaned, for example. “Pickup” functions as an adjective." formatter_data="android_java">
+    Pickup method
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_SELECT_PICKUP_ADDRESS_FOR_PICKUP_METHODS" desc="Text implying that a user needs to choose a pickup address to see the pickup methods. For example, this could be the address for laundry pickup." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Select a pickup address to check pickup methods and requirements.
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_SELECT_PICKUP_ADDRESS_FOR_PICKUP_METHODS" desc="Text implying that a user needs to choose a pickup address to see the pickup methods. For example, this could be the address for laundry pickup. “Pickup” functions as an adjective." formatter_data="android_java">
+    To see pickup methods and requirements, select an address.
   </message>
-  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UNSUPPORTED_PICKUP_ADDRESS" desc="Text implying that a user needs to choose a different pickup address, because the currently selected address is not supported. This address can be used, for example, for laundry pickup." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Unsupported pickup address. Select a different address.
+  <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UNSUPPORTED_PICKUP_ADDRESS" desc="Text implying that a user needs to choose a different pickup address, because the service can’t pick up items from that address. This address can be used, for example, for laundry pickup. Note that here, “pick up” is a verb." formatter_data="android_java">
+    Can’t pick up from this address. Select a different address.
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_UNSUPPORTED_PICKUP_OPTION" desc="Text implying that a user needs to choose a different pickup option, because the currently selected option is not supported. This option can be used, for example, for laundry pickup." formatter_data="android_java">
-    That pickup option isn’t available. Try a different option.
+    This pickup method isn’t available. Try a different method.
   </message>
   <message name="IDS_PAYMENTS_ANDROID_APP_ERROR" desc="Error message that is shown when an Android payment application fails to start." formatter_data="android_java">
-    Unable to launch payment app.
+    Can’t open payment app.

[srahim, 2017/04/10 22:06:38]

Minor nit: if this is a single sentence, and no other sentences appear with it,
remove period per Google style.

[gogerald1, 2017/04/10 22:14:02]

Done.

   </message>
 
   <message name="IDS_UTILITY_PROCESS_PAYMENT_MANIFEST_PARSER_NAME" desc="The name of the utility process used for parsing manifest files.">
     Payment Manifest Parser
   </message>
   <if expr="is_android">
     <message name="IDS_EXTERNAL_PAYMENT_APP_LEAVE_INCOGNITO_WARNING" desc="Alert dialog text warning the user that incognito mode does not continue into external payment apps." formatter_data="android_java">
       Leaving incognito mode to pay via an external application. Continue?
     </message>
   </if>
 </grit-part>