components/new_or_sad_tab_strings.grdp - Issue 2774293002: Refine the strings on the Incognito NTP and improve the descriptions

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Issue 2774293002: Refine the strings on the Incognito NTP and improve the descriptions (Closed)

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1 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>	1 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>

2 <grit-part>	2 <grit-part>

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4 <message name="IDS_DEFAULT_TAB_TITLE" desc="The default title in a tab.">	4 <message name="IDS_DEFAULT_TAB_TITLE" desc="The default title in a tab.">

5 Untitled	5 Untitled

6 </message>	6 </message>

7	7

8 <!-- Sad Tab Strings -->	8 <!-- Sad Tab Strings -->

9 <message name="IDS_SAD_TAB_TITLE" desc="The title of the sad tab page that is shown when a tab crashes. This is intended to be a humorous exclamation of d ismay." formatter_data="android_java">	9 <message name="IDS_SAD_TAB_TITLE" desc="The title of the sad tab page that is shown when a tab crashes. This is intended to be a humorous exclamation of d ismay." formatter_data="android_java">

10 Aw, Snap!	10 Aw, Snap!

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136 </message>	136 </message>

137 </if>	137 </if>

138 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_UNDO_THUMBNAIL_REMOVE"	138 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_UNDO_THUMBNAIL_REMOVE"

139 desc="Action link text to undo removing a thumbnail from the most visit ed section.">	139 desc="Action link text to undo removing a thumbnail from the most visit ed section.">

140 Undo	140 Undo

141 </message>	141 </message>

142	142

143 <!-- Incognito Tab redesign strings -->	143 <!-- Incognito Tab redesign strings -->

144 <!-- TODO(msramek): Merge with the above section once this is fully launch ed. -->	144 <!-- TODO(msramek): Merge with the above section once this is fully launch ed. -->

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146 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_OTR_TITLE" desc="Title of the Incognito new tab page." formatter_data="android_java">	146 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_OTR_TITLE" desc="Title of the Incognito new tab page. The Incognito mode provides private browsing experience by hiding browsin g activity from other people using the same device. However, it does not make th e user completely invisible or anonymous; please don't translate it as such." fo rmatter_data="android_java">

147 You’ve gone incognito	147 You’ve gone incognito

148 </message>	148 </message>

149 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_OTR_SUBTITLE" desc="Subtitle of the Incognito n ew tab page, explaining to the user that the Incognito mode hides their browsing activity from other people using the device." formatter_data="android_java">	149 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_OTR_SUBTITLE" desc="Subtitle of the Incognito n ew tab page, explaining to the user that the Incognito mode hides their browsing activity from other people using the same device. The second sentence clarifies that there are two important exceptions from this rule - downloaded files and a dded bookmarks will be persisted even after the Incognito session is closed." fo rmatter_data="android_java">

150 Now you can browse in private, and other people who use this device won’ t see your activity.	150 Now you can browse privately, and other people who use this device won’t see your activity. Downloads and bookmarks will be kept.
	srahim 2017/03/27 22:51:50 Recommended: However, downloads and bookmarks will Recommended: However, downloads and bookmarks will be saved. Add "however" to call this out because the paragraph begins by saying what won't be seen. We should avoid using the word "kept" and stick to familiar language like "saved." msramek 2017/03/28 12:50:37 Done. Show quoted text On 2017/03/27 22:51:50, srahim wrote: > Recommended: However, downloads and bookmarks will be saved. > > Add "however" to call this out because the paragraph begins by saying what won't > be seen. > We should avoid using the word "kept" and stick to familiar language like > "saved." Done.
151 </message>	151 </message>

152 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_OTR_DISCLAIMER" desc="A disclaimer on the Incog nito new tab page, explaining to the user that downloaded files and added bookma rks will be persisted even after the Incognito session is closed." formatter_dat a="android_java">	152 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_OTR_NOT_SAVED_BULLET_POINTS" desc="Bullet point s listing data that are not saved in the Incognito mode. The '#' character in th is text represents a bullet point. Please keep it unchanged and do not add addit ional spaces around it. The text between the pair of '\|' characters will be high lighted. 'Browsing history' means a history of visited websites. 'Searches' mean s searches done in the address bar. 'Cookies and site data' refers to data saved by websites on the user's device (e.g. sign-in state, preferences, etc.)." form atter_data="android_java">
	srahim 2017/03/27 22:51:50 We need to delete "Your searches" per legal review We need to delete "Your searches" per legal review so should also delete the corresponding sentence in the desc srahim 2017/03/27 22:51:50 Change "highlighted" to "boldfaced or otherwise em Change "highlighted" to "boldfaced or otherwise emphasized in the style appropriate for your language. msramek 2017/03/28 12:50:37 Done, but I want to clarify what you mean. The st Show quoted text On 2017/03/27 22:51:50, srahim wrote: > We need to delete "Your searches" per legal review so should also delete the > corresponding sentence in the desc Done, but I want to clarify what you mean. The string will be post-processed in the code. I will replace the section between \|\| with <b></b> or <em></em> or something such. It is possible that for different alphabets that will look differently, but in general, it will be boldfaced. Was your intention to ask translators to choose their own way of emphasis, e.g. boldface vs. italics? I'm not sure if we want to do that. If a translator misunderstands, they might accidentally replace \|\| with invalid HTML tag, or hypothetically insert malicious JavaScript code :) msramek 2017/03/28 12:50:37 Done. Show quoted text On 2017/03/27 22:51:50, srahim wrote: > Change "highlighted" to "boldfaced or otherwise emphasized in the style > appropriate for your language. Done. srahim 2017/03/28 23:03:43 No, the reason I suggested a change was because I Show quoted text On 2017/03/28 12:50:37, msramek wrote: > On 2017/03/27 22:51:50, srahim wrote: > > We need to delete "Your searches" per legal review so should also delete the > > corresponding sentence in the desc > > Done, but I want to clarify what you mean. > > The string will be post-processed in the code. I will replace the section > between \|\| with <b></b> or <em></em> or something such. It is possible that for > different alphabets that will look differently, but in general, it will be > boldfaced. > > Was your intention to ask translators to choose their own way of emphasis, e.g. > boldface vs. italics? I'm not sure if we want to do that. If a translator > misunderstands, they might accidentally replace \|\| with invalid HTML tag, or > hypothetically insert malicious JavaScript code :) No, the reason I suggested a change was because I was afraid they would interpret "highlighted" to mean highlighting format, e.g. yellow. We could just say "the text between the pair of \|\| characters will be formatted programmatically to emphasize those words." To avoid the misunderstanding of replacing \|\| with invalid HTML. msramek 2017/03/29 09:56:39 Done. Makes sense, thanks! Show quoted text On 2017/03/28 23:03:43, srahim wrote: > On 2017/03/28 12:50:37, msramek wrote: > > On 2017/03/27 22:51:50, srahim wrote: > > > We need to delete "Your searches" per legal review so should also delete the > > > corresponding sentence in the desc > > > > Done, but I want to clarify what you mean. > > > > The string will be post-processed in the code. I will replace the section > > between \|\| with <b></b> or <em></em> or something such. It is possible that > for > > different alphabets that will look differently, but in general, it will be > > boldfaced. > > > > Was your intention to ask translators to choose their own way of emphasis, > e.g. > > boldface vs. italics? I'm not sure if we want to do that. If a translator > > misunderstands, they might accidentally replace \|\| with invalid HTML tag, or > > hypothetically insert malicious JavaScript code :) > > No, the reason I suggested a change was because I was afraid they would > interpret "highlighted" to mean highlighting format, e.g. yellow. We could just > say "the text between the pair of \|\| characters will be formatted > programmatically to emphasize those words." To avoid the misunderstanding of > replacing \|\| with invalid HTML. Done. Makes sense, thanks!
153 Downloaded files and bookmarks will be kept.	153 Chrome \|won’t save\| the following information:#Your browsing history#You r searches#Cookies and site data
	srahim 2017/03/27 22:51:50 Delete the bullet "#Your searches" per legal revie Delete the bullet "#Your searches" per legal review msramek 2017/03/28 12:50:37 Done. Show quoted text On 2017/03/27 22:51:50, srahim wrote: > Delete the bullet "#Your searches" per legal review Done.
154 </message>	154 </message>

155 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_OTR_NOT_SAVED_BULLET_POINTS" desc="Bullet point s listing data that are not saved in the Incognito mode. The '#' character in th is text represents a bullet point. Please keep it unchanged and do not add addit ional spaces around it. The text between the pair of '\|' characters will be high lighted." formatter_data="android_java">	155 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_OTR_VISIBLE" desc="Bullet points listing entiti es that might be able to see the user's Incognito activity. The '#' character in this text represents a bullet point. Please keep it unchanged and do not add ad ditional spaces around it. The text between the pair of '\|' characters will be h ighlighted. The bullet points elaborate on the fact that Incognito only provides privacy with respect to other users on the same device. Websites you visit stil l know that you visited them. Your employer and internet service provider can st ill monitor network traffic, even if it comes from the Incognito mode." formatte r_data="android_java">
	srahim 2017/03/27 22:51:49 Change "highlighted" to "boldfaced or otherwise em Change "highlighted" to "boldfaced or otherwise emphasized in the style appropriate for your language" msramek 2017/03/28 12:50:37 Done. (But please see my clarification question as Show quoted text On 2017/03/27 22:51:49, srahim wrote: > Change "highlighted" to "boldfaced or otherwise emphasized in the style > appropriate for your language" Done. (But please see my clarification question as above) srahim 2017/03/28 23:03:44 I was afraid they would interpret "highlighted" to Show quoted text On 2017/03/28 12:50:37, msramek wrote: > On 2017/03/27 22:51:49, srahim wrote: > > Change "highlighted" to "boldfaced or otherwise emphasized in the style > > appropriate for your language" > > Done. (But please see my clarification question as above) I was afraid they would interpret "highlighted" to mean highlighting format, e.g. yellow. We could just say "the text between the pair of \|\| characters will be formatted programmatically to emphasize those words." To avoid the misunderstanding of replacing \|\| with invalid HTML. msramek 2017/03/29 09:56:39 Done, as above. Show quoted text On 2017/03/28 23:03:44, srahim wrote: > On 2017/03/28 12:50:37, msramek wrote: > > On 2017/03/27 22:51:49, srahim wrote: > > > Change "highlighted" to "boldfaced or otherwise emphasized in the style > > > appropriate for your language" > > > > Done. (But please see my clarification question as above) > > I was afraid they would > interpret "highlighted" to mean highlighting format, e.g. yellow. We could just > say "the text between the pair of \|\| characters will be formatted > programmatically to emphasize those words." To avoid the misunderstanding of > replacing \|\| with invalid HTML. Done, as above.
156 This information \|won’t be saved\|:#Your browsing history#Your searches#C ookie data

157 </message>

158 <message name="IDS_NEW_TAB_OTR_VISIBLE" desc="Bullet points listing entiti es that might be able to see the user's Incognito activity. The '#' character in this text represents a bullet point. Please keep it unchanged and do not add ad ditional spaces around it. The text between the pair of '\|' characters will be h ighlighted." formatter_data="android_java">

159 Your activity \|might still be visible\| to:#Websites you visit#Your emplo yer#Your internet service provider	156 Your activity \|might still be visible\| to:#Websites you visit#Your emplo yer#Your internet service provider
	srahim 2017/03/27 22:51:49 Chelsea agreed that we should add "your school" to Chelsea agreed that we should add "your school" to more clearly convey the meaning that any entity that manages your network may be able to see your activity. So the 2nd bullet would read: "Your employer or school" msramek 2017/03/28 12:50:37 Done (here and in the description). Show quoted text On 2017/03/27 22:51:49, srahim wrote: > Chelsea agreed that we should add "your school" to more clearly convey the > meaning that any entity that manages your network may be able to see your > activity. > > So the 2nd bullet would read: "Your employer or school" Done (here and in the description).
160 </message>	157 </message>

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